The winner
By Louise178
Sun, 19 Dec 2010
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3 comments
The year didn't stop
it carried on
didn't care
it trundled on
hurried past
and started again
didn't give me a chance
to say hold on
wait, stop, I need to think
relentless, it was eager, hungry
it multiplied, added once
again and again
again and again
again and again
and again I desperately clung
one step behind
as it raced on
I quickened my step
but to no avail
what a game
it has played
too quick for me
and now I am gone.
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Comments
I really enjoyed, I really
I really enjoyed, I really like the repetition!
Beeme xx
k.
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I loved the repetition too!
I loved the repetition too! The short lines worked really well and contributed to the structure and effect of the poem!
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