A Night in Camargue
By Silver Spun Sand
Wed, 23 Feb 2011
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It wasn’t the wind
through bending bamboo
on the brackish,
delta marshes;
more like a psaltery –
singing, sweet and low
and it wasn’t
the rain, trickling
from an old, tin roof
we heard, but mandolins...
nor was it the thrum
of a hundred wild,
white horses – hooves
pounding the ground,
but as many guitars
strumming
a cantabile beat
nor the sighs from fields
of waving flax, grew
all around. It was
the blues on a sax.
No more was it
the swish of silken skirt
as it whispered to the floor
by those rosebud toes,
but a faint feathering
of drums...
the moon – dangling
from a lilac tree
calling the tune;
‘Mood Indigo’
they played...
the night
the stars,
naked,
danced.
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I really enjoyed, This is so
I really enjoyed, This is so beautiful, particularly the last stanza. Love those images!
Beeme xx
k.
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Thank you Tina, I will do
Thank you Tina, I will do ;-) I've tried another, but I found it challenging.
Beeme xx
k.
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Love the short-line
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love the short-line structure here, Tina. Especially effective in that last stanza! Like the image of 'naked' stars too. Much enjoyed :)
Magic xxx
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Brief visit, Tina - just
Brief visit, Tina - just back from taking granddaughters to see Justin Beiber film so not in poetry mood needless to say - but this caught my eye. Lovely.
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A fabulous poem Tina just
A fabulous poem Tina just beautiful and stunning imagery - a real lyrical treat. :-)
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Like those before, I have to
Like those before, I have to say my favourite part is the last stanza. You're such an inspiration!
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Hi Tina, what can I say,
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Hi Tina,
what can I say, this is another wonderful poem, so
beautifully expressive.
Jenny.
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Lovely, evocative poem. I
Lovely, evocative poem. I really liked the repetition. Well done. Neil
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very much enjoyed the
very much enjoyed the organic flow of this poem.
well deserved cherries as always.
cheers,
jose.
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