Just Another Poem (I.P.)

Cherry

By Silver Spun Sand

Sun, 27 Mar 2011
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32 comments
 

I am
similes
metaphors
alliterations...

I am
reason
I am
rhyme

I can teach
preach
scold
and beautify

I am
but a string
of words
on a sheet of paper...
and yet

I can break hearts
I can mend them
make tears
or dry them

I am all
and I am nothing
at all

I am
just another
unread poem
I am a dying
art

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Submitted by Beeme on
oh, but this is so much more than just another poem Really beautiful :-) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Thanks, Beeme. So very much. Tina;-)xx

 

Submitted by TVR on
I am sleeping with this one under my pillow tonight, SSS. Lovely! sue

TVR

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Ta, sue...ever so;-) SSS

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
very nice Tina!

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Insert - thanks;-) Tina

 

Submitted by barryj1 on
Liked the ending best of all.

barryj1

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Ta, barry;-) I have been told that before...but I can't quite remember where or when;-) Tina

 

Submitted by seashore on
Georgeous!

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Glad you thought so, Coral;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand Definitely not an umnread poem, or a dying art. Excellent. And the well done cherry! Just seen this, bug, had flu bug, going round. julie xx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Oh dear, Julie. Hope you are feeling better now. Pleased you enjoyed this one and thank you for reading;-) Tina xx

 

Submitted by Highhat on
No your poems are never a dying art. A very good and abstract poem for the IP Tina ;)Pia

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Many thanks for your words, Pia. Much appreciated;-) Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina, I think you have proved that poetry is something that is not easy to do, it takes a lot of thought, which I see you have put into this brilliant IP. Congratulations on well deserved cherries. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi there, Jenny:-) Thank you so much. Actually, this was one of those poems that literally wrote itself. I only wish they all did;-) Tina

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Very good this one Tina - much enjoyed. The power of poetry! :-)

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Power, indeed! Many thanks, fb. Pleased you enjoyed;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Overthetop1 on
This is poetry as it should be written. Just beautiful in its simplicity.

Overthetop1

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
...as is your kind comment, OTT. I thank you for it;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Dark Fox on
I love this poem. it is not an unread poem or dying art. Thank you for the lovely read again x Dark Fox

Kayleigh Nichols

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Dark Fox, many thanks. I am glad you read this one:-)x Tina

 

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love the short-line structure to this one, Tina. This flows right off the 'page', as it were! A richly deserved cherry :) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Many thanks, Magic. Pleased you enjoyed;-) Tina xxx

 

Submitted by shoe on
I loved reading this, succinct with a powerful message, I hope the ending in in contention!

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Ha,ha, Shoe!! Certainly hope so;-) Many thanks. Pleased you enjoyed. Tina

 

Submitted by Dynamaso on
Wow, what a beauty this is!

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi there, Mark;-) Not half such a beauty as your lovely comment. Thank you. Tina

 

Submitted by oldpesky on
Loved it, especially I am but a string of words.

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Great minds obviously think alike, oldpesky. That's exactly what my partner said;-) Many thanks. Tina

 

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