The Return

Cherry

By fromagreenhill

Sun, 26 Jun 2011
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Fill the woods
with music
and let it lift me,
up the great trunks,
past the boughs,
through the leaves
and into the blue sky above,
so I can see clearly all that
is good and true and ancient,
so I can see what you wanted
and how to return.

25-6-11

Certificate U
Poem
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I love this poem! You have one little typo on the first line - should be "the"

 

Submitted by fromagreenhill on
Ah! Thanks.

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
A little gem;-) Tina

 

Submitted by seashore on
I agree with Tina - `gem' is the word I would use too.

Submitted by Dynamaso on
Such economy yet so full. Very good!