I Wish to Linger Long

By skinner_jennifer

Mon, 05 Mar 2012
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15 comments
 

The day's summer shadows
guide my fortuitous way;
sunbeams sparkle
like a million jewels,
leaving me in touch
with nature at its best;
it all seems dreamy,

when through a glade,
concealed by tall grasses,
threads of gossamer
hide rainbow colours.
Then, hidden from view,
I spy a golden lake;
a magic shimmer
of ripples,
as silent whispers
of a gentle breeze
take my breath away;
I wish to linger long.

Certificate U
Poems
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
You take me there, and make it so vivid, and delightful. Thank you! Rhiannon (linger long' is a nice bit of alliteration!)

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
actually, 'linger long' seems quite onomatopoeic, doesn't it? Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Highhat on
I wanted to linger longer too. You made it sound like a beautiful place Jenny:) Pia

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Speechless, Jenny. Truly beautiful. Tina

 

Submitted by russiandoll on
Dreamy indeed. Spellbinding :)

 

Submitted by jolono on
Really lovely words Jenny, whispers of a gentle breeze. Nice!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou for your kind words Rhiannon, I'm so pleased you could capture so much from this poem and thankyou for letting me know. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Pi, yes! wouldn't it be wonderful, to have a place like this that you could go to? You can linger long by this lake anytime you like Pia, if only in your minds eye. Thankyou for reading and I hope you are okay. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Good morning Tina, your words always take my breath away, for I know that poetry means so much to you. Thankyou for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi there russiandoll, well what can I say? but I love that word 'spellbinding,' it is exactly what I was trying to convey. Thankyou for reading and letting me know and for your kind words. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi jolono, really pleased you liked this poem, glad I could capture those whispers of a gentle breeze for you. Always good to hear from you, hope you are well. Jenny.

 

Submitted by onangelswings1111 on
Beautifully written the words paint the perfect picture in my mind , thankyou for sharing , feel summer is already here!!

G.Owen

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Why, thankyou so much for your beautiful comment, onangelswings1111...I'm so glad I could bring some summer sunshine into your day. Thankyou so much for reading and for letting me know, I really appreciate it. By the way, I love your name. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Denzella on
Hello Jenny, Yes, a beautifully written poem that paints an idyllic picture of tranquillity. Reading your words I found I was transported and for the time spent reading this I was there enjoying the hazy sunshine and viewing the scene as if through a gossamer curtain. Wonderfully descriptive. Moya
 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Moya, Oh! for the peace...quiet and beauty, which I hopefully captured in this poem, I think I did from your beautiful words. It's so good to be able to transport you to a place of calm. Thankyou so much for reading, it's always appreciated, knowing it's touched the soul. Jenny.