Forgive Me?

By Edenfalls

Wed, 04 Apr 2012

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14 comments

Did I say I'm sorry,did I tell you that you're right
Or did I just stand there,spoiling for a fight
Did I say forgive me, did I utter those fine words
Or did I just mumble and say something quite absurd
Did I say I love you,did I say how much I care
Or did I just fold my arms and give you a hard stare
Did I say I love your smile,did I say you light my day
Or did I say the opposite and pretend to walk away
I should have said all these things, I know the words you crave
Instead I live regretting things while I'm visiting your grave.

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I like the way you've said

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Wed, 2012-04-04 12:17

I like the way you've said this. Rhiannon

Really liked the words and

Permalink Submitted by sandyshores on Wed, 2012-04-04 13:23

Really liked the words and the sentiments - if I could cherry pick I would give you one !

Ooh, brought up with a

Permalink Submitted by scratch on Wed, 2012-04-04 16:45

Ooh, brought up with a sudden halt at the end - I didn't see that coming. Well done Edenfalls.

EF, it's short, to the

Permalink Submitted by jolono on Wed, 2012-04-04 16:50

EF, it's short, to the point, emotional, regretting, pulls you up sharp at the end. What more can I say apart from very good!

Excellent writing,

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Wed, 2012-04-04 18:05

Excellent writing, Edenfalls...and then that surprise ending. Superb. Tina

Oh, I did like this poem.

Permalink Submitted by Denzella on Wed, 2012-04-04 20:35

Oh, I did like this poem. It's so full of wistful regret and then the end...such a surprise. Very much enjoyed this one. Moya

Thank you Rhiannow.

Permalink Submitted by Edenfalls on Thu, 2012-04-05 10:46

Thank you Rhiannow.

Sandy, thank you for your

Permalink Submitted by Edenfalls on Thu, 2012-04-05 10:48

Sandy, thank you for your kind words. And maybe you helped get the cherries?

Jolono, thanks mate.

Permalink Submitted by Edenfalls on Thu, 2012-04-05 10:49

Jolono, thanks mate.

Tina, glad you liked it.

Permalink Submitted by Edenfalls on Thu, 2012-04-05 10:50

Tina, glad you liked it. I've not had much time lately, so have a lot of peoples work to catch up with. Yours is on my list!

Ah Moya, thank you. It was

Permalink Submitted by Edenfalls on Thu, 2012-04-05 10:53

Ah Moya, thank you. It was inspired by a TV programme I was watching, where an old gentleman was talking about his wife who had passed away. He was saying that he should have told her more often how he really felt. Lesson for all of us there me thinks!

Forgive Me?

By Edenfalls

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I like the way you've said

Really liked the words and

Ooh, brought up with a

EF, it's short, to the

Excellent writing,

Oh, I did like this poem.

Thank you Rhiannow.

Sandy, thank you for your

Jolono, thanks mate.

Tina, glad you liked it.

Ah Moya, thank you. It was

The ending was a smack in

Thanks Chris

What a lovely piece of work

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