Let’s not miss any opportunity
By span
Sat, 07 Jul 2012
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Let’s not miss any opportunity
Dear Joe and John,
How about I stop smoking,
and we could go sit in the Victorian gardens
black globular berries sticking to the soles of our shoes,
you could tell me about olives and tapes,
we could lie back look at the sky
palm spread our fingers out behind our heads
like fans in old photographs.
We could dress up and go to the beach
do the Charleston on the sand dunes
and not mind if it rains on us like dogs,
we could write down all the red houses,
grin until people ask us in for tea
and we will tell them about similies
and nuzzle their sofas.
And when we get tired,
and we will get tired,
we can all get on one bike and tuck our legs in.
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There is absolutely no point
There is absolutely no point in telling you how much I like this poem because you never respond so I won't bother.
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Written as if from a bygone
Permalink Submitted by blighters rock on
Written as if from a bygone era when innocence shone through the cracks of sadness and ruled the day gloriously, when scepticism was frowned upon like puked up chips on the street. Where the hell did we all go wrong?
This is beautiful.
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The warmth and spontaneity
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
The warmth and spontaneity of friendship in a nurturing narrative voice. Loved the trinity on a bicycle :-) Thoroughly charming and enjoyed reading.
all the best
lena xx
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Seem to have self-replicated
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Seem to have self-replicated my comment by twitchy send fingeritis, my apologies x
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I was so taken with your
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I was so taken with your piece that I started writing my comments in the users sign-in box. So let's just say that I thought it was Wonderful.
Rich
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Sorry span, I was teasing
Sorry span, I was teasing and trying and failing to be funny - please keep posting your wonderful poems.
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