Awesome?

By Rhiannonw

Fri, 06 Jul 2012
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‘That’s awesome!’
How easily they’re awed!
(or just, not bored?)
a word to measure
surprise and pleasure?
is that the depth of awe?
Is there no more? –
a wonder inexplicable,
a height incomprehensible,
a purity astounding,
a holiness confounding,
a glory causing bending
of knee in humble awe,
and worship.
Do ‘awesome’ things today
respect, and reverence,
or
a touch of fear,
arouse, and draw,
any more?

Certificate U
Poem
Christian, Biblical
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Yes, it does seem the latest word. Your poem reflects my views entirely, Rhiannon. Cleverly done. 'Awesome'...some might say;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
! thank you, Tina. One of those thoughts that had been bubbling for a little time before getting down in verse! regards, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by scratch on
Hi Rhiannon, I like this one a lot and couldn't agree more. You have hit a rich vein recently. Well done.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Well thank you, scratch. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by TVR on
Hi Rhiannon. Nice pacy poem with snappy rhythm and ryhme. I really enjoyed it. Trev

TVR

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Thanks, Trev. Glad you felt it paced well, and enjoyed the words. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on
Good thoughts nicely expressed. Enjoyed. Linda

Linda

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Thank you for your comment, and glad you enjoyed reading this. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Denzella on
Rhiannonw, Yes, I agree with the all the others. A thoroughly nice poem with a well thought out subject. Moya
 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
thank you, Moya, and glad it struck a nice chord. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Shannan on
Personally, I’d far rather people are using the word ‘awesome’ instead of some other the other ‘nasty obscenities’ I’ve had to experience; but it’s always worth looking at things from every angle, thanks for the insight into your feelings… LOVE all the open discussions about things :-) as Danny Sapani said: ‘words are powerful, trust them.’

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Couldn't agree more regarding obscenities, Shannan, but I do feel we need to be careful about downgrading a good word, words can gradually lose their meaning, and I think in Britain, there is little appreciation of real awe of the real and true God, despite the concept being there in much science fiction in a sense. It is good to hear from you, and your real use of the word for the things of Jesus' wonderful love and gospel. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by MrSquirrel on
This is aweso ...uhm... very good.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Thank you! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by moonphish on

i really like this..."awesome" is such an overused word

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, I was glad you brought it up again in your usual cheery style! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by peterelbee on

It seems everything these days is described as awesome. That music, movie, book, television series, sandwich, poem, story, article, phone and space cowboy from alpha centauri; they're all awesome.  Perhaps it is a special, magic age, or people have reverted to having limited vocabularies and mimic what they see or hear on social media.  I thin true awesomeness is something no eye has seen or ear had heard. Something that truly accentuates what it means to be a human being, or perhaps the expansive universe itself.

Really like the poem

Peterelbee

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you! I was glad to revisit this!

As you say, such peer pressure to mimic and to be excited at all times – words like 'brilliant' too.

I like your end comment about true awesomeness too, and especially would use it in 'true awe, right reverence and right fear' of God and his Jesus, - until you see him so, his mercy and love and welcome mean little! Rhiannon