Co-operation (IP)

By Rhiannonw

Wed, 01 Aug 2012
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A breakdown in co-operation
in orchestra, or football team:
cacophony, humiliation,
a waste of training, wreck of dream.

A breakdown in co-operation
between the brain and leg and foot
will devastate the locomotion
with disability acute.

A breakdown in co-operation
between those differing in gift
will bring society’s destruction,
– each man an island all adrift.

To bring about co-operation
between those who live lands apart
needs contact, thought, appreciation,
desire, and willingness of heart.

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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
So much truth here, Rhiannon. Brilliant for the I.P. Tina;-)

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Thank you, Tina, very much. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Sooz006 on
Nice use of the IP. A breakdown in co-operation between those differing in gift will bring society’s destruction,...really liked these lines.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Thank you for tellling me. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Denzella on
Hello Rhiannonw Yes a great I P. '- each man an island all adrift.' Loved that line and so true too but all good. Really enjoyed this. Moya
 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Glad you did, thanks for telling me. warm regards, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

Another lovely poem - full of truth and encouragement to become better in all things.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jean. We're all the stronger if we can share, encourage, 'pool our resources, gifts', but sadly, will not occur perfectly now! Rhiannon