"7"autumn haiku
By Mark Heathcote
Thu, 20 Dec 2012
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autumn—red and gold
her dress a prier—crumpling rose
trees bare—interlock
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emerging from ice
and snow—a white swan—appears
“abject moon—thy sorrow”
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blackthorn—green branches
cascading amber's locket—
after school Pep-talks
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winters fog lagoons
carp sedate break—roll like clouds
nearby—the city graveyard
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opaque damp shadows
gleam in orange and red leaf
in storms—goldfish leap
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mistletoe and holly—at
the Municipal graveyard
grasp the nettle—pure folly
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chestnut pendulums—
they’re good at playing tick tack toe—
pity gravity isn’t fair
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Hi Mark This is really,
Hi Mark
This is really, really good! Beautiful imagery... i write haikus myself but they're nowhere near this good.
Jealous!
Natalia =)
Natalia :)
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Your haikus inpired me, some
Your haikus inpired me, some beautifullines here.
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