Ouch!

By Parson Thru

Sat, 05 Jan 2013
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My mouth's the most dangerous
place on my face
As my tongue fusses
and pokes around
while I bite at pieces of pie

It avoids being chewed
by the skin of my teeth
Till they punish my cheek
by crunching its flesh
and all but making me cry

Certificate U
Poem
Parson Thru III
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Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
Maybe you shouldn't be in such a hurry to eat delicious food? hehe PT

Submitted by Bee on
I wonder why we don't bite the insides of our cheeks more often - or our tongues in sleep. Oh, but doesn't it hurt when it happens! Nice poem. Bee
Bee

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Hi Pia, hi Bee. I was Starvin Marvin! I was probably shoveling too much in. I went to a phase of waking up biting my tongue. Hopefully over that. But does it hurt, Bee. Thanks for your comments, both.

Parson Thru