Thicker than water
By Parson Thru
Sun, 06 Jan 2013
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They say that
blood's more thick, but
water runs more clear
and doesn't leave a stain
This, and many
other thoughts
invade the sterile glare
of the near-deserted train
Beyond the darkness
I see life
reflected, pleasure
resting cheek-to-cheek with pain
I close my eyes
to find the truth
and feel the measure
of what flows within my veins
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Interesting - with the end
Interesting - with the end of each 4th line, rhyming with eachother, and each 3rd - a half rhyme with eachother.
Enjoyed.
Bee
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