Our Love Will Last Forever

By well-wisher

Thu, 14 Feb 2013
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I could compare it to a flower
but a flower’s sure to wilt
or compare it to the sweetest wine
but wine can be spoilt and spilt.
I could compare it to a Summer
but a Summer always ends
and our love will last forever;
forever lovers and good friends.

I could compare it to a fire
but a fire turns to ash.
I could compare it to a fortune
but you can run out of cash.
If I compared it to a shining star
then maybe that would do.
‘Cause as long as stars keep shining,
that is how long I’ll love you.

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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Nice one, indeed. Tina;-)

 

Submitted by well-wisher on
Thank you, Tina. Writing to orders not my strong point and I know it's not a great love poem but it was written in something of a rush so that I could post it on V-day. I'm really glad you liked it.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn