Visual Paradise

Cherry
Poem of the week

By skinner_jennifer

Thu, 22 Aug 2013
  • 9998 reads
39 comments
 

Consider waking

to the sound

of the rustling

leaves...whispering

on a gentle breeze,

 

staring out across

perfumed fields,

as fresh zephyr

rouses purple

headed lavender,

 

beyond...rugged

paths lead down

to the bracing ocean,

a far cry from the

busy urban jungle

that is my reality,

 

so I sit and muse,

bringing to life a

sweet paradise,

I can only visualize

in my wildest dreams.

Certificate U
Poem
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

this is lovely Jenny!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I agree, really enjoyed. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Bee on

What a wonderful flow of thoughts and words!

Really special.

Bee

Submitted by london_calling79 on

Very sweet and calming. Like a warm breeze.

 

Submitted by seashore on

Absolutely beautiful, Jenny!   I think that could be my paradise too.

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Wonderful, Jenny.  Just wonderful;-)

Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thank you for reading Insert, I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Made my day to see this was cherry picked, thank you so much editors.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon,  thank you for reading my poem and letting me know your thoughts, always appreciated.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Your words mean a lot Bee,  appreciate you letting me know and thank you for reading.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi London calling,  loved your comment...it was what I was trying to convey,  you got it completely right. Thank you for your words and for letting me know.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hello coral,  you know It's my paradise too.  Glad you enjoyed and appreciate your comment. Thank you.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Your words mean a lot Tina,  thank you for letting me know you liked reading this poem.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by scratch on

I'm breathless Jenny.  This is superb.  Get in there!

 

Submitted by moonphish on

so lovely...you took us all on a walk of wonder...i really enjoyed this :) - alvin

Submitted by moonphish on

so lovely...you took us all on a walk of wonder...i really enjoyed this :) - alvin

Submitted by VeraClark on

The whole concept of this sweet paradise is gorgeous. What a sensual, visual delight. Well deserved POTW, Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

What an amazing surprise to turn on to this morning. Can't believe it...thank you so much for the poem of the week, really made my day. I have a really huge smile on my face.  Thank you...thank you once again.  smiley Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

AAAH! thank you scratch, your words always mean a lot and I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading. Hope you have a great bank holiday.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi there Alvin,  more than happy I could take you on a walk of wonder.  Appreciate you letting me know. Hope you have a fine day.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Vera,  I'm just so pleased you could connect with what I was seeing.  I really do appreciate you letting me know and thank you so much for reading. Have a great weekend.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by scratch on

laughWhoa!!! Poem of the week!  GET IN THERE.

 

Submitted by seashore on

Congratulations on POW Jenny!  A worthy winner - top of your game.  Coral x

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on

Don't know how I missed this one Jenny but I am glad I caughte up, it's lovely.  Well deserved accolades!

Linda

Submitted by celticman on

I like the artful simplicity that brings us there.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thanks scratch...much appreciated.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Coral, this is all so exciting...thank you for the congrats.  Jenny. x

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I much appreciate you reading Celticman...glad you enjoyed and thank you for your comment. Have a good weekend.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Linda, much appreciate you reading this poem.  I'm so over the moon as you can imagine.  Thank you for your lovely comment.  You have a great weekend.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

A nice place indeed. Lovely flow.

Parson Thru

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