Queer as Folk

Cherry

By Bee

Mon, 13 Jan 2014
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11 comments
 

I saw Salman Rushdie
slurping slushies in a cafe
whilst carefully crunching crackers
seeming knackered and remote

He bit a thickly buttered butty
stiff and oddly dodgy
looking doughy, sick and stodgy
and stuffed it roughly -all disgusting
down his goaty bloated throat

Perhaps it wasn't Rushdie
slurping slushies in the cafe
but some other cranky chappy
getting cross at being stared at
crunching crackers- I don't know

But if it was the sod, it's odd
because although he didn't know me
he got security to throw me
on my arse
out of the shop

I couldn't stop them
though I don't know what was wrong
with taking photos of that
strange and creepy slushie slurping 
cracker crunching
sandwich munching
weirdy bearded bloke

Goodness me,what can I say,
there's nowt so queer as folk

Certificate 12
Poem
Other Fiction

Comments

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Yes, funny lot - people! Nice poem          Elsie

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Elsie.

Bee

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Great stuff, Bee.  Well done on the more than deserved cherries

Tina

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you, Tina.

Bee

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

This put a smile on my face - I can just see him with bits all over his scruffy beard. Great stuff Bee!

 

Submitted by Bee on

Glad to have put a smile on your face, Jane.

Thanks for your kind comments.

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you Editor, for the cherries and for reading.

Bee

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Very creative, Bee, well done --- like a river of ideas bouncing about, collecting and uncollecting.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks so much, Richard. That's really nice.

Bee

Submitted by jeand on

HI Bee

I liked the rhythm and rhyme to this one - and the humour. When I saw Salman Rushdie, I thought it was going to be deep and meaningful, but far prefered this approach. It must have been fun to write.

 

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Bee on

It was fun to write, and I'm afraid, not ever so meaningful.

Thank you, Jean. 

Bee