Eveningesque
By Silver Spun Sand
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What a beautiful poem of
What a beautiful poem of nature and all that is evocative of what we want from love. The last stanza followed by the final two lines has it for me. It's lovely - gives me that strange feeling I get when I see swans, or geese flying over - like all my memories.
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Enjoyable scene as Bee says,
Enjoyable scene as Bee says, and a clever use of the IP without making the colours too dominant. Rhiannon
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A perfect I P Tina,
A perfect I P Tina,
you describe all of nature beautifully. Those swans mating for life set the scene too.
I loved the raspberry, paisley sky and the creche of stars. A perfect combination.
Jenny.
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Yes, Tina,
Yes, Tina,
Another lovely nature poem. I thought all the imagery your words created worked so well and the swans mating for life strikes me as wistful. I think?
Moya
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