Oh Poet

Cherry

By Bee

Mon, 12 Oct 2015
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Your rhymed reason for being

is seeing and saying the scene

from every available angle



with word trick imagery, and truths

alluded to with alliterated assonance

done in the epitome of brevity. 



We dance, tangled between art 

and romance in conjured voices

versed while no one sees us



written in between fine lines,

imaginary and only brought to life 

in black and white when you decide -



the time is right, Oh poet.

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Submitted by celticman on

it's deep, deep, perhaps too deep for me, with the ancient cabal of alliteration and assonance, poetry, what's it got to do with me? 

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks for reading it CM. 

Bee

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Sounds like making music with words, and no worries about a clarity of meaning, or whether there is real meaning?? Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Bee on

Hi Rhiannon.

it's just trying to say that the dancers are perhaps imaginary and only come to life when the poet decides to write them in, and telling the him the time to do so is now. But then, who are the dancers, and who is the poet?

Thanks for reading. 

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you for the cherries. 

Bee

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Bee

I really like this poem - and for once feel I can understand it.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Bee on

Oh great! I'm really pleased. 

Thanks Jean.

Bee

Submitted by alice sunderland on

entertaining and intelligent. deep and insightful. envy-inducing! xx

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Alice - glad you liked it.

Bee

Submitted by VeraClark on

Made to trip folk up and exclude them or are they just puzzles? It's like soul food.

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Vera.

Bee