Yo Dominator! (Poetry monthly)

Gold cherry

By Deliberately Evolving

Mon, 09 Nov 2015
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29 comments
 

See the video version here: https://vid.me/JgIx

 

Yo Dominator!
 
"Bro's before ho's, yo" -
ain't that what they say? 
I don't like the word ho - 
that's not my name.
You're not my pimp, I'm not a pro
and I ain't your prey.  
Don't call me ho again 
cos' I ain't gonna play.
 
I'm not stupid or ridiculous, 
I'm not your slave!
It might be love your telling me 
but its power that you crave.
Elevate, recreate - do something 
for your standards mate.
not here for your convenience - 
So watch how you behave.
 
Im not a hairy lesbo -
though there's nuffin wrong with that.
At least they keep it real,
they're just themselves 
an that's a fact.
I have the view I'm equal
and you ain't all that - 
when I listen to you speak - seriously!
It's just a lot of crap.
 
I'm not fat, ugly, boring - 
don't bother to compare, 
I might not have the boobs 
and legs right up to there,
my teeth are kind of crooked 
of this I am aware 
but If I don't measure up to models -
Really man - Do you think I care?
 
I'm happy being me
And I think I'm pretty fab
I got talents and ideas 
And I've got the gift of gab.
Im more than just a piece of meat
you think that you can grab 
I don't like your hands all over me 
It's gross, it makes me gag.
 
You are a dominator
and you're just another clone
think I'll crumble if you leave me -
scared and all alone.
But I've survived despite you,
not because you helped me along,
and don't need your muscle 
I'm already plenty strong.
 
 
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Comments

Submitted by Bee on

That's a really great performance, AE.

Excellent!!!

Bee

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Cheers Bee - I'm not much of a rapper but I tried to do it with feeling. 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

I love it. The longer it went on the more you got into it - do it more!

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

It's really hard to do

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Great rapping, love the attitude and gestures, well done!  smiley

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thank you. I'm usually very soft and gentle so it was hard for hard for me to act tough.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

hahahahaha - absolutely brilliant! What a star!

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks incert!

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Starfish Girl on

You certainly did get a lot of feeling into this.

Great piece, love to see it performed.

Lindy

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks Lindy!

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Glad I read this, it's a brilliant bit of rapping.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Cheers Jenny - all credit to real rappers. It's way harder than it looks.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks for the cherries Admin

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Fantastic rant... fantastic message... fantastic performance!!!

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Cheers Terry!

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

Damn, that good! You are a shining star. Made my day.

Rich

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Wow cool! Thanks !

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by celticman on

gift of the gab, is something we all try to grab. It's escaped from the zoo, by yo dominator it too. 

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Lol. Cheers Celticman.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Wow, I am impressed Ae. Your ability to use technology to the maximum puts this old fogey to shame; I still haven't found the socket in my laptop for the microphone.
I know that rapping is very hard to do but you passed with flying colours and you are a consummate actress.

As a rapper would say: RESPECT.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Happy that you are impressed Luigi.

does your mobile phone have the ability to record? Most of them do these days. If so its pretty easy to record on the phone.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by VeraClark on

Fabulous. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done.

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

laughGlad you enjoyed it Vera. Thanks! 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

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Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks!

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Pat G on

Brilliant. You've nailed it. More please. 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Cheers Pat. I adapted it to an anti bullying poem too. I might gets some kids to do the poem with me and put a video up

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by jolono on

Loved it AE. Attitude? Oh yeh....

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Cheers!

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.