red-dress-free-flowing-love
By Nolan
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let your redrobe fly let it flow
let it go let your redrobe go!
smile over your shoulder
smile-smile in your eyes!
swinging round-and-round
turning-turning madly!
with your eyes laughing
how your redrobe flies!
do you hear the song of thunder!
can you hear the silence?
do you hear! the song of songs
can you hear the roar of fire?
beloved red-dress dangling all in flame
free dangling all around your body!
dance-dance your red-dress freely
dangling-dancing all around freely
let me wrap my dreams oh wrap them dearest
tightly-tightly-tightly turning dearest tightly!
darling oh let red-dress dreams wrap you
cover you in a coat of love and wonder!
oh let me wrap my dreams tender
around you let me wrap my dreams
around-you-around-you tender
around-and-around-and-around you
dangling all around your body wild-wild dancing
stepping easy feet softly-softly lightly on the ground!
tender-dear let your dress gently wrap you snugly
it’s too late to stop now with your red-dress on fire!
let your red-dress go-girl let your red-dress flow!
let the tambourines ring! let the guitars sing!
let the red-dress-girl let your red-dress-wirl
let the red-dress fly! let the red-dress swirl!
turning-turning madly swinging round-and-round
come let it swing-swirl girl the best is yet to come!
flying-flinging swinging-turning winding-spinning
free-flowing-love flowing darlingbride around you!
smile over your shoulder! smile-smile in your eyes
let your redrobe sing! laugh-laugh with your eyes!
do you feel the rhythm do you feel the freedom?
oh let me swirl my lines let rhyme freely flow!
my song the madness! your music be one
your dress! a warm glove gentle passion
your coat holds firmly! your dancing body
music-dress-song your body becomes one!
my dove oh maiden-bride my only dove
love-of-loves freely wind a cloak of magic
wrap you in ecstacy! oh joy all around you
free-flowing-love a rapture of delight!
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There's such a magical feel
There's such a magical feel to this poem. I could imagine a young gypsy girl dancing around a huge glowing camp fire in the middle of the woods at night, surrounded by colourful old gypsy caravans and men and women clapping along to the girls dancing.
Conjured up such an atmosphere and very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
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I love the energy of this
I love the energy of this poem. It's full of life, sensual, explosive. Nicely done.
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A lovely, wild song of a poem
A lovely, wild song of a poem! Full of fire and life.
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Found this exhilarating and
Found this exhilarating and beautiful, reminded me of Flamenco. Brilliant
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