Reflective whimsey

By Rhiannonw

Thu, 24 Aug 2017
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8 comments
 

 (photo 2)

Autumn colours in the pond,
high blue screens the fish beyond,
swimming in the depth below;
will the sky soon overflow
down the weir, leaves rise to float,
from the tree’s autumnal coat?

[Poetry Monthly August: Blue Sky Tree High – maybe with a bit of whimsey]

 

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Comments

Submitted by hedgehog1 on

A fitting tribute to "Blue Sky Tree High Rhiannon

Edward

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Edward. A bit of fun from a photo I like very much, reflections of lovely scenes can be very special! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

melting colours, soon the blue will turn a wintry bright and cold

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

True, Elsie, beauty in the changing seasons.

I was intrigued with pretending in this photo that the autumn leaves on the trees would be rising from the depths etc rather than falling as the reflections were so clear – just a bit of fun!! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Your imagination really worked well in this poem Rhiannon.

Love the reflective idea.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, again, Jenny. Glad you enjoyed, and I hope you continue to be able to get out more now, with increased mobility and lack of pain. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

like the idea of the sky overflowing, and the leaves going up. Sort of like through the looking glass

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

! I had a bit of fun there! Thanks, Rhiannon