Storm

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Tue, 14 Aug 2018
  • 2795 reads
11 comments
 

Rain ground-pounding
lashing,
lightning flashing,
booming sound
of thunder crashing –
winds howling
gales bashing
rifting, lifting;
water standing
cars splashing
earth soaking
drinking,
water sinking
down to roots
to feed new shoots,
empower life;

while wild turmoils last
beware, take care,
heed warning,
– dangers storming –
shelter from vast
torrential blast
until the fury’s
spent, far past.

[IP:storms]

 

Certificate U
Poem
Nature
Nature
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

I love a nice big dramatic thunderstorm - and I think you've managed to get all its ingredients into this poem - thank you!

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Excellent! I also love thunderstorms I find them a spiritual experience, in their savage fearful beauty. I love all kinds of storms if ever I have a dauther I'd like to call her Storm &

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you for your comment. The peace after the storm is lovely too! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Insert. Was trying to get the feel of a storm! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks for cherries. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Some wonderful use of words Rhiannon, I could feel the storm unfolding.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jenny. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Great rhythm you have cought the music of the storm and made it into words

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Di, very much. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by forest_for_ever on

Your work never dissapoints and I simply adored the rhythm of this poem.  For some reason I was transported back to a famous piece of work 'the night mail' and the rhythm in that. A really inspiring piece of work Rhiannon.  Well done...again!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, forest, that's lovely to know! Rhiannon