So ManyWords in a Row - Now with Vocals


By hudsonmoon
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https://soundcloud.com/hudsonmoon/im-a-great-big-beautiful-mess-sometimes
I’m
a
great
big
beautiful
mess
sometimes
Don’t
know
which
foot
to
put
out
there
first
sometimes
I’m
pretty
darn
careless
had
my
leg
in
a
cast
once
That
time
when
I
thought
I
could
fly . . .
off
the
roof
of
that
flaming
red
barn
Mom
said
I
couldn’t
so
I
did
just
because
Friends
said
I
shouldn’t
but
I
did
‘cause
I’m
boss
My
do’s
and
my
don’ts
both
collide
when
I’m
sinking
And
it’s
times
like
that
that
start
me
to
thinking
I’m
a
great
big
beautiful
mess
sometimes
When
asked
to
make
up
my
mind
all
the
time
So
I
yank
out
my
brain
and
tell
it
it’s
feeble
And
I
hand
it
over
to
some
scientific
people
But
they
tell
me
it’s
useless,
‘got
too
many
bumps’
And
they
hand
it
back
over
and
I’m
back
in
a
slump
So
I
crawl
back
to
bed
where
it’s
warmer
than
toast
Where
there’s
left-
over
gum
on
the
crooked
bed-
post
I’ll
read
me
some
comics
and
laugh
till
I
cry
Then
I’ll
say
me
a
prayer
and
dream
I
can
fly
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This had me laughing so much,
This had me laughing so much, Richard. Thanks for posting. A piece of pure brilliance. I can almost see you singing it as you strum that ukelele!
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Are you saying
Are you saying I am fat? Must say you can also be pretty obnoxious.
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Hi Richard,
Hi Richard,
loved the layout of this poem, I could almost feel you jumping off the roof to fly and falling as I read.
Jenny.
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A wonderful piece of wise
A wonderful piece of wise nonsense, and it's our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please do share/retweet if you enjoy it too.
Rich - sorry but Facebook isn't accepting photos today! It went on alright on Twitter though.
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Well deserved golden cherries
Well deserved golden cherries for this lovely nonsense song (with added dog accompaniment)!
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