Thanks in part to Louis M and William W: another love poem
By Ladle
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There’s a gap in the railings
We didn’t realise was there
At the end of a jitty I’ve always known
Where still time stands
And the burdock leaves are
awnings we can cover the ants with
to protect them from the rain
I want you to be warm
I want you to never be cold
I’d been orbiting for years, and now
I’ve fallen into a world you’re in
And the main thing is you’re in it
with me and
Earth has not anything to show
more fair
Your intelligent hands, striking chords
inside me and out
Your voice:
I’m led into my own depths.
Your dark eyes, bridges over
crevasses I’d only dared squint at.
Dark into light.
In this new world
The sun glances off angles
differently.
Better.
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love this one -
love this one - congratulations on a well deserved cherry!
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Nice
to see a dialect word in a poem (jitty) if we don't use them they'll die out. For those of a Yorkshire persuasion it's a ginnel, and if you're Jockinese (like me), it's a close.
Beautifully done.
best
Ewan
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a better world indeed.
a better world indeed.
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This is our Poem of the Week
This is our Poem of the Week - Congratulations!
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Beautiful!
Really well-thought poem, congratulations!
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