Green

Gold cherry
Poem of the week

By winking_tiger

Thu, 17 Sep 2020
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6 comments
 

I saw you yesterday

On the green

You sat talking easily

Your deep lazy laugh

Carrying over the grass

 

You didn’t mean 

To look up 

And see me.

 

But when you did 

The blue of your eyes

Held reflections

Of her golden hair

 

I dropped my heart 

On the concrete path 

And kicked pieces of it 

All the way home.

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Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Simple but so effective - that last stanza is perfect

 

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Submitted by celticman on

yes, bit of a kick in the end. 

 

Submitted by Mark Burrow on

This is superb. 

 

Submitted by kittywake on

As simple as it needs to be, making every word count.

 

Submitted by Yutka on

with a few simple words you paint a whole picture of betrayal, excellent and lingering....