The Worst Words
By ralph
Sat, 16 Jan 2021
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If I asked you while the sun
fell on our past, sinking beneath
a brown and loathing sea,
what the worst words were.
You would perhaps shrug your
shoulders and look at your shoes.
I would say it’s not, ‘I don’t love you’.
It’s not even, ‘I hate you’.
I would say the worst words
when all is said and done, when
the tide retreats to reveal the sticks
and stones of our life are, ‘I don’t care’.
And you’d tighten your laces and walk away.
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Sounds like a painful break
Sounds like a painful break up. I like the symbolism of the sea. And the sticks and stones. Hope the tide turns soon. Sorry if I'm wrong.
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'I don't care' is perhaps the
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'I don't care' is perhaps the world's worst weapon. It can leave you gasping at the bottom of a cold, brown sea.
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