Embracing New Year

Cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Fri, 31 Dec 2021
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26 comments
 

New Year comes in swiftly

like cascading waterfall;

a trailing veil of pure energy

and beauty, gushing its way

down from hills on high,

 

reminding me of lively gatherings;

sipping sparkling champagne,

music radiating, laughter filling air;

dazzling well loved friendships,

atmosphere erupting in lively cheer.

 

River of gurgling pleasures,

bubbles pulsing in time;

raindrops splashing – till

excitement dissipates,

quietly turning to mist.

 

Through Thistle Down village

water ripples, essence touching

days with furrows that dip and rise;

where on village green folk smile

recalling New Year Eves of old,

 

when gatherings were many and

Auld Lang Syne rang out, to carry

through uncertain times, for that

there is no doubt.

 

Like river gently meanders;

life flows on in quiet calm, with

resolutions all sponged up;

absorbed, though not always long term.

 

Appearing in spring with sprinkling

of blossom, and a scattering of seeds

watered in with rain, new life is born

and New Year begins again.

 

Pixabay free image.

 

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Comments

Submitted by Turlough on

Your poem describes New Year celebrations beautifully but with caution and a lot of past tense.

reminding me of lively gatherings

Reminding me of how New Year used to be. In this sad, blighted world I think there'll be as many looking back as there will be looking forward tonight at midnight.

But for you Jenny and all those around you, I wish a Happy New Year, when it comes. 

Turlough

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

and a big Happy New Year to you and yours. I tried to imagine a village somewhere in Scotland...hence the name Thistle Down village, the thisle being a kind of emblem of Scotland. The waterfall appeared in my mind like a fireworks display, gushing down into the valley below. The river representing the calm after the rush, meandering into the New Year.

So glad you enjoyed reading and many thanks for letting me know.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Lovely, lively effervescent poem, Jenny

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I love your description of this poem, especially effervescent, reminds me of all those fizzy bubbles in champagne. Thank you so much for your kind words.

Hope your New Year is happy and healthy.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by donignacio on

There's usually quite a bit of excitement for me when the new year comes, and I like the optimistic way you describe it. Excellent poem! 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I couldn't resist seeing the New Year in with this poem. I'm glad you enjoyed reading.

I hope you and yours have a Happy, healthy New Year, and thank you for your kind words of encouragement.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

This is such a vibrant piece Jenny - thank you, and Happy New Year!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I wasn't sure if readers would get the gist of this poem, so It was such a lovely surprise to see those cherries, which I will treasure as part of the New Year...MANY THANKS. 

I was trying to think outside the box with the waterfall...rather than using fireworks, which are quite normal now. Loving the idea of the poem as vibrant, gives a lively atmosphere to what I was trying to portray. 

I hope you and yours have a Wonderful, Healthy, Happy New Year too.

Jenny. smiley

 

 

Submitted by celticman on

have a good new year Jenny, keep the muse moving 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

this poem was especially for all of you up in Scotland, which was why I chose the name Thistle Down village. Knowing how important New Years Eve is to the Scottish I just couldn't resist.

 Thank you for your kind words and I will certainly try and keep the muse flowing, and keep on looking for inspiration.

Hope you and yours have a Happy, Healthy New Year.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Writing lovely poetry has become your trademark, Jenny.

This description of the advent of a new year is perhaps wishful thinking; the desire to relive the happy memories of years past. Despite the current uncertain situation, optimism underlies this well-crafted composition that augurs well for the future.

Let's hope that better times will arrive at the stroke of midnight.

My best wishes for new beginnings.

Luigi xx

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I will  smile smiley and tthink positive thoughts, even in these uncertain times. My partner is always fun to be with, so I count myself very lucky, he spurs me on with his cheerful disposition.

I think you're right about wishful thinking, which was why I put this poem under fantasy, it would be great to ring in the New Year like I used to, I always smile at those memories of certain madness, when we could kiss under the mistletoe, and party like there's no tomorrow, recalling banging pots and pans together with the neighbours, not something you see anymore.

I'm glad you thought there was optimism in this poem Luigi, that's exactly what I hoped for. I do appreciate you reading and letting me know your thoughts.

Happy, Healthy New Year to you and yours.

Jenny. xx smiley

 

Submitted by jxmartin on

May the falling waters be gentle and the rush soft on your life, Jen.

JXM

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

what heart warming words of encouragement. I'm so glad you picked up on the energy of this poem, and I'm so grateful for the kind wishes.

Thank you so much for reading and appreciate your thoughts.

Happy, Healthy New Year to you and yours.

Jenny. smiley 

 

Submitted by marandina on

A sweeping journey into a New Year with all of the emotion then relative normality as the seasons hold sway. Beautifully done. Happy New Year to you, Jenny. Paul :)

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Lovely encouraging words from you Paul. It makes all the difference that we can write down our feelings on ABC Tales, and feel that others understand. When I first started writing this poem, it was like going on a journey, not really knowing whether others would get what I was trying to say, so I'm always so grateful to know the poem works.

Thank you so much for reading and letting me know.

Happy, Healthy New Year to you too.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by David Kirtley on

Your poem is reminding me a little of Bruce Springsteen's 'The River'. The new year is like the high expectations at the beginning which turns into the river of life as the year (or life!) passes/flows. I like the imagery you have used! Happy new year!

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

you know it's a real honour that my poem reminded you of Bruce Springsteen's The River. Every word of your comment sums up my poem and adds structure to what I was trying to convey. I'm glad you could picture the imagery, because I had this scene in my mind of somewhere up in Scotland, which is how the poem came about, which then drew me into New Years Eve.

I'm very happy you enjoyed reading and appreciate your thoughtful comment. 

Many thanks and hope the New Year is Healthy and Happy for you.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

Such a lovely image of the river, Jenny. Sums it all up so beautifully.

I was thinking about 'old' New Years a couple of days ago - I do feel sorry for all the youngsters that are missing out on the chance to make those memories, because of the restrictions at the moment. Although, to be honest, I'm not sure it stopped many people round here! 

Very Happy New Year, Jenny.

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I agree with you about the young not being able to make memories. When I look back at some of the antics I got up to, I feel happy, even though they were mad times, like at midnight in our local pub kissing everyone in sight...we can't do that anymore, not that I would wish to at my age, but at the time it seemed like the thing to do.

It was very quiet where we live on New Years Eve, apart from the fireworks going off at midnight, gone are the days of banging pots and pans out in the street.

I always remember the year 1980, we had a party in our new house, and at midnight we did the conga down the street and joined up with the local pub, it was so much fun, I was still finding streamers all over the house even in the summer.

Happy days. wink

Anyway, thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment, it gave me a chance to reminisce, which is always nice.

I do hope you have a Happy Healthy New Year.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Your poem sparkles like twinkling lights at a New Years Eve celebration. It winds and moves through memories giving a burst of joy to the reader. You've truly captured the essence of this holiday. Happy New Year Jenny, may it be the best year ever.smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Your comment was a pleasure to read. Knowing I captured the essence of  New Year's Eve really made my day.

Many thanks for reading and letting me know you enjoyed, it's much appreciated.

I hope 2022 finds you in good health, and brings you all you wish for.

Jenny. smiley

 

 

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Jenny

what a lovely poem about New Year's coming in.  You seem to be able to write about just about anything. Thank you for replying to my last post. My computer is not working at the moment, so I am using my son's before he goes to work.

Happy New Year.

Jean Day

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

sorry to hear your computer's not working, that must be so frustrating for you. It's kind of you to read my poem, glad it worked for you and thank you so much for letting me know.

Take care.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Hades502 on

Great one Jenny, as usual. You seemed to really capture the celebration in this. Good writing. Congrats on the cherries.

GGHades502

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I'm glad I could capture the celebrations of New Years Eve. It's good of you to read and let me know you enjoyed.

Many thanks.

Jenny. smiley