Resolution

Gold cherry

By agnosticnun

Fri, 07 Jan 2022
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12 comments
 

At end, rebirth. This year I will
Eat better. Walk. Drink my fill
Of gold with every meal.

I will tell the trees I love them at least once a month.

This year I will find time for wisdom.
See friends. See illusions. See through capitalism. 
Perhaps see gods, but not believe in them.

I promise to thank my knees for their service.

This year I will breathe moonlight without fear.
One day in the springtime I will hug my ghosts
And wish them well. Farewell. Perhaps, this year.

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Comments

Submitted by donignacio on

That is stunning. A remarkable and profound poem. I very much enjoyed it. -Michael

 

Submitted by celticman on

perhaps this year perhaps next. in the end it's the end. 

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

This year I will breathe moonlight without fear.
One day in the springtime I will hug my ghosts
And wish them well. Farewell. Perhaps, this year.

beautfiul

and the knees part made me smile!

 

Submitted by agnosticnun on

Thank you! Alas that a new year does not bring new body parts. They should be thanked!

Kristi

Submitted by Penny4athought on

I highly recommend hugging a tree- its good for the soul. This is a lovely contemplative poem, apropos for the season of beginnings, or endings - whichever way you choose to view it,  from the eve or the day, filled with appreciative thoughts to be alive - to 'breathe the moonlight'. Loved that line and will consider the action when next I find myself in the moonlight. Happy New Year agnosticnun, and thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry today.smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by marandina on

".. I will breath moonlight without fear." Some particularly beautiful lines in there. Each year is rebirth and a wonderful way to look at life. Paul

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

How can you not love a poem that has so much positivity.

Enjoyed reading.

Jenny.

 

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Submitted by agnosticnun on

Thank you!

Kristi

Submitted by seannelson on

Neat; Meaningful, whimsical work. 

"If I send you post-cards from the side of the road: photographs of movies, and hearts about to implode"  -  Elliott Smith

Submitted by Turlough on

I really like your poem. 

I could see a bit of my own life in these lines ...

See friends. See illusions. See through capitalism. 
Perhaps see gods, but not believe in them.

For the captitalism and the gods seem to cause me even more worry than the twinges in my knees do.

Good on you!

Turlough

Submitted by HarryC on

You've encapsulated my own thoughts here.  This poem demands several reads, which is always a good sign for me. 

Perhaps, this year.  Let's hope so.

Well done with Pick of the Day.