They've Closed the Road
By Jane Hyphen
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Have you heard,
they’ve closed the road.
Black ice reflections deep,
like a mirror from the archives.
We don’t want to see
ourselves like that.
There were dragons in our skies.
In the photos, we were lit.
We glowed as fires raged
down into our roots, leaving
ashes hot enough to solder
hearts forever closed.
All the rocks you threw,
endure upon the path.
A cairn to mark our end.
We cannot see this through.
The lights that lit our way,
all weakened and gone out.
Scalding rivulets erode,
what seemed once so smooth.
Tears corrode the surface.
Turn back, do not advance,
there’s no way through,
no passage or deliverance.
This road has made us old.
Together we grew so high
but there’s a crosswind
and we are so tired.
The ditches of the past
are a dangerous place to sleep.
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5 reads in, I think I know a
5 reads in, I think I know a little what this might be about. Your poems are really good value, you know, can chew them over for days, months, years.
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this is good Jane - I'll
this is good Jane - I'll happily echo Di's comment. Very well deserved cherries!
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we travel your road.
we travel your road.
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There's certainly depth in the sentiments in this. Layers of meaning. Roads are great analogies and you have used it so eloquently and so well. Great stuff, Jane. Paul
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Jane I like your poem about the dark road block
Jane I like your poem about the dark road block.
Hooray for the blackbirds, crows and big Gannets.
We do fly stuff
xxray
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