Allowing Letting Go

Cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Thu, 12 Jan 2023
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8 comments
 

Don't waver – observe the beat,

monitor and feel sounds that

cleanse motivation;

 

stimulating action as

hours – minutes – seconds

swamp minds with illusions,

 

reflecting what we see as reality;

yet is not as it seems,

for all lives are different.

 

Vapours blowing hot and cold

challenge atmosphere,

filtering through this enigma;

 

where the wild are without bias,

erasing fears; for the magic of

strangeness glows...and so I let go.

Certificate U
Poem
Obscure Poetry
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by celticman on

Let if go. That's a song out of Frozen. Very apt. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Letting go is what I am writing about Jack. Glad you understood, thought it might be a bit too obscure for readers, but it felt right for me.

Thank you so much for the cherries.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by marandina on

"...where the wild are without bias,

erasing fears; for the magic of

strangeness glows...and so I let go."

 

Love that last stanza. Letting go....yes.....it pays to do that if you can. Lovely stuff, Paul

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Paul,

I agree, being able to let go is a gift we should all cherish.

I'm happy you got the message and thank you for letting me know.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Let Go and let God

a slogan for us control freaks. Keep well Jenny!

Tom

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Being able to let go and free the mind...thinking outside the box, has always been what I strive to achieve.

It's what I like about writing poetry, you can be free to express your own personal feelings, even though it might seem a bit obscure to others. 

It's kind of you to read Tom and let me know your thoughts.

Many thanks and you take care.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by D G Moody on

A deep poem, that requires several readings. And for me the key is in the title - to allow the letting go; a bit like relaxing ones self, not always easy to do. Dougie

Dougie Moody

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi there Douglemoody,

I appreciate you taking the time to read. It's sometimes hard to understand other peoples thoughts when it comes to poetry. I'm pretty much going through a period of ideas that are of thinking outside the box and are fun to play around with..

I'm lucky enough to be retired, so I pretty much have loads of time to contemplate and collect my thoughts, which is hard to do when you're working.

Many thanks for your kind words, they mean a lot.

Jenny.