Escape To Ridgeway
By skinner_jennifer
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Flashes not bolting
Thunder done booming
Rain no longer popping
Remoteness of peaceful healing
Trail reflective in puddles appearing
Strolling before soft daylight fading
Copse of trees where we're heading
Place of winds forever changing
Verges fringed with green entwining
Inquisitive eyes take pleasure peering
Concealed limbs persist in shivering
Will return when winter's sighing.
Photo's my own
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So nice to see another of
So nice to see another of your lovely poems Jenny. I hope you're on the mend, or at least on the way to on the mend!
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"Place of winds forever
"Place of winds forever changing" your love for this area shines through :0) Have you written of here before, with rooks?
I am glad you are feeling well to write. Is there any news yet about a date for your operation?
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Brilliant news about 30th
Brilliant news about 30th October! I am so glad you will have only a few more weeks, and not wait all through Winter, though serious amounts of fluid must be really painful. I do so hope you will be able to go out to feed your birds and speak with your trees before long XXX
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I liked your use of rhythm
I liked your use of rhythm and rhyme in this, Jenny. It gives the feel of a brief enjoyd visit, refreshed by a short brisk stroll. Did you get to the hospital yesterday for a consultaion? Rhiannon
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winter is sighing...me too, I
winter is sighing...me too, I love the sunshine and light, but hey, more time or reading and writing.
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I'm so glad you've got a date
I'm so glad you've got a date for your op, Jenny. Fingers crossed for a brilliant outcome and that you'll soon be out there enjoying your walks again.
I love the words 'winter's sighing'. Sums it up. Another thoroughly enjoyable read from you!
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I too love the ridgeway, the
I too love the ridgeway, the bits I have walked had plenty of lovely views, historical features and very satisfying to walk on. Trail reflective in puddles appearing, so evocative of this time of year. We've had all the seasons this week. Good news regarding your operation, fingers crossed it will be transformative.
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That's an evocative poem,
That's an evocative poem, Jenny. A pen-picture beautifully drawn as always. Just lovely.
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