Skating Without Ice

Gold cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Fri, 28 Feb 2025
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20 comments
 

 

Softly glide, liquid wondrous

through lazy days; how fragile

your plight on pond and lake,

rays rippling beneath hasten

you on,

 

then, in dreamy moments we

see you're full of purpose; yet

impetuous, most mischievous,

flimsy elegance trips the nimble

dance.

 

Traverse for a time; filled with

peril, imminent cravings seek

morsel. Cavort in a whirl if you

will...skim under peaceful skies;

but stay vigilant Water Striders

to watchful eyes.

 

Please watch: Just love this video: It gave me a smile. smiley

https://www.bing.com/videos/riverview/relatedvideo?q=water+striders+or+g...

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Nature

Comments

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Beautiful descriptions of life Jenny! Like "Cavort in a whirl if you will" Almost weekend and it is month-end too. Shops will be a madhouse.

All the best, take it easy with that operation! Tom

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Tom,

I'm glad you liked the poem. It was so much fun to write and video gave me inspiration.

I had the hip replacement back last October and life is so much easier now. Thank you for you kind words.and for reading too.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I think I've usually called them Pond Skaters, but they are fascinating, aren't they? Looks as graceful as flying! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Yes, you're right about them being called Pond Skaters Rhiannon, I too knew them as that. Decided to go with the video name which inspired me. They truely are fascinating as you say.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Always a pleasure to hear from you.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

This is wonderful Jenny - one of your best!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

It's an honour to know this poem was one of my best insert. It was a pleasure to write. Great to know you enjoyed. Many thanks for reading and letting me know.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by onemorething on

Gorgeous, Jenny. It's our Pick of the Day. Do share widely.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

A BIG WOW! From me.

What a surprise. Thank you so much for the gold cherries Rachel. Still can't believe I've got Pick Of The Day.

You've made my weekend. I love the picture too. 

Thank you loads again and glad you enjoyed.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by onemorething on

The painting is in the public domain, hopefully you can see the little water skater, bottom right. It's by Ohara Koson.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

THANKS!.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by celticman on

water strider do need watchful eyes. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

They certainly do Jack. All those large preditors just out for a bite to eat. wink

Always great to hear from you and thank you for reading.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Turlough on

And without skates too, which is just as well because they'd struggle to fasten them up.

This is a great poem. And I like your choice of song too.

Nice one Jenny!

Turlough

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

You made me laugh Turlough. laugh Had this vision of tiny little skates on the end of there flimsy legs...if that's what you call them. wink

Always a pleasure to know you enjoyed reading. The song really went so well with the video, just couldn't resist putting it on with the poem.

Many thanks for reading and your lovely thoughts too.

Jenny. 

 

Submitted by Turlough on

If pond skaters took to drinking whey protein shakes they could become our planet's dominant species. I think it's worth a try.

laugh

Turlough

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Ha! Ha! laughProtein shakes all round for the wee ones. 

Thanks Turlough. yes

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

This is a wonderful poem, Jenny, very elegant just like its subject. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I like elegant Jane. These little insects are so delicate and their life is so short, it was a pleasure to capture them in this poem, that was a lot of fun to write.

Many thanks for your kind words, which I was very grateful for.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

This is so beautiful, Jenny! I can watch them for ages, but could never have thought up this amazing poem, you have really caught their grace and insouciant fragility, as well as their environment. Brilliant

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thank you so much for your kind comment Di. I just found that video so amusing. The words: Skating Without Ice was what first gave me the idea for the poem, then it went from there and just seemed to come together.

I'm glad you enjoyed and thank you so much again for letting me know. I'm always grateful.to hear from you.

 Jenny.