florals of you

Cherry

By JoseHdz

Fri, 14 Jan 2011
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10 comments
 

The floral pattern
Running along
The café’s upper wall
Resembles you
It mimics your touch

The way the red
Rococo roses
Seem to flirt with the
Corner of the café’s
Worn wall

Reminds me of our
Walk in the park
Last night

Where we talked about
Poetry
Among other things
And you said
You hated rhyme

And I spontaneously
Gave you a kiss
On the lips

Sitting on the park bench
We noticed how
Lovely
The city is at night

The way the lights
Guide our step:

What
Exactly
Are we looking for?

Certificate U
Romance

Comments

Submitted by seashore on
Lovely.

Submitted by shoe on
A delicate touch and enchanting imagery.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
A great read JoseHdz. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I always like the way you pick little details jose

 

Submitted by Highhat on
A lovely poem Jose ;)Pia

Submitted by fatboy74 on
A lovely journey Jose beautifully described. :-)

 

Submitted by JoseHdz on
thank you all.. glad it seemed to work :)

Submitted by JoseHdz on
Thank you SundaysChild. happy that you found it both pretty and real; that is what I was going for :) cheers.

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Totally charming, Jose and oh, so deceptively simple. Tina;-)

 

Submitted by JoseHdz on
glad you found it deceptively simple, Tina; i always strive for that effect :) jose.