THE POET'S CURSE III - THE CONTEST

By kheldar

Wed, 19 Jan 2011
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The contest calls for twenty lines,
A mere one-sixty words:
What about the adjectives?
What about the verbs?
What about the synonyms,
The antonyms as well?
What about the narrative,
I wish my verse to tell?
Are such stifling limits
A fair test of one's skill?
For I've penned six score poems
And most don't fit the bill.
Does avoiding pears and apples
Really make a peach?
Is writing to a formula
A prize beyond my reach?
The contest calls for twenty lines,
A mere one-sixty words:
What about the adjectives?
What about the verbs?
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COPYRIGHT DM PAMMENT 19th JANUARY 2011

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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I second your sentiments entirely, David...and you said so much...in just twenty lines;-) Nice one. Good luck;-) Tina xx

 

Submitted by kheldar on
Thanks for that Tina, glad I'm not the only one! Hope you're well. David :--) xxx

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I'm fine and hope you are too. Thanks for asking;-)xx

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Iv'e looked at this contest and you are right kheldar, it just does not feel enough words at all and I read a previous winners and it seemed abit lightweight if you know what I mean. Really liked this. :-)

 

Submitted by kheldar on
Thanks FB for reading, for commenting, for agreeing with the sentiment, but mostly for enjoying. :--)

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