Try to Tell Myself...
By Silver Spun Sand
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No dandelion, this – I cup
in my hand, but her upturned
freckly-face, topped by a spiky mop
of yellow curls.
No Eden, this – wherein I walk,
but twixt the cleft
of this green hill...the tilt
from one village into the next.
A willow courts the stream – slips,
giggling by, and hers is the laughter;
her voice – the chattering pines;
the rustle of leaves – her footsteps
on the scree.
Yet, who am I trying to kid
as the wind, suddenly blows chill?
As clouds play tag with the sun –
for a moment, she is gone;
nothing more than a handful
of words – flown from my mind
like a bevy of birds...Until
across these same corrugated fields
and further than the eye
could ever hope to see – breaks
her smile. For here – she is.
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Wonderful poem full of love!
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No flattery, this- when I
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I think Sid put it well-
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Wonderful way to start the
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"As clouds play tag with the
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The depth of feeling
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Would like to stay in this
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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