At the beach
By JamesF
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A child throws a stone
Into blue-green sea
Whose waves crumble quickly
At his feet, foam for a moment.
A young father watches over his
Vast brood, not knowing
Where to look next, focuses
On a yellow-arm-banded one.
A woman sits alone with
Her back to the empty sea
Building a castle in the sand
As her little one comes running.
Boys buzz about slowly on
Jet skis, surviving the current
As it slaps their vessel, and
Threatens to dethrone them.
As fully-covered women paddle
In the shallows, a young man in
Speedos puffs out his chest, then
Enters cold water, and the sun sits
High in heaven, watching over all.
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JRTF
19/03/16
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Enjoyed the series of cameos,
Enjoyed the series of cameos, and especially the waves crumbling at the boy's feet, and the jet-skiers nearly being dethroned. Rhiannon
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enjoyed this word picture -
enjoyed this word picture - thank you!
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I enjoyed reading this, too.
I enjoyed reading this, too. I felt on edge in case someone - a child got drowned, and was kind of pleased it wasn't going anywhere beyond the great description of the scene.
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