Moon
![Cherry Cherry](/sites/abctales.com/themes/abctales_new/images/cherry.png)
By Beeme
Sat, 15 Jan 2011
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15 comments
A luminous
organic moon
rises high-
flashes its
mineral glow
a halo of orange
light dissolves
into gold
aglow, a blue
rim forms, like
a frozen pond-
magical for the
moment before
it dissolves,
the incandescent
purple-blue shine,
like the presence
of undesired bruises
tainting skin.
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Like this one, Beeme. The
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Like this one, Beeme. The structure - nice and tight. You paint a magical picture;-)
Tina xx
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new Beeme Nice one very well
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Beeme
Nice one very well explained
full of colour and words stand out.
lovely.
Like the presence of undesires
bruises and tainted skin.
julie xx
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Hi Beeme, you have really
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Beeme,
you have really described the moon so beautifully
in this poem. I love the colours, as Tina said so
magical.
Thanks for the read.
Jenny.
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this is beautiful beeme - I
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
this is beautiful beeme - I especially like the last stanza
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Well done with knobs
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Well done with knobs on...for the cherry, Beeme;-)
Tina xx
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Pretty wonder4ful stuff and
Pretty wonder4ful stuff and the last stanza with the bruise image is a blinder - really well done. :-)
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Magical, very your style
Magical, very your style that I like K x
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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