One moment ago

By Beeme

Mon, 31 Aug 2009
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13 comments
 

One moment ago-
I was flying with the doves
when you entered into my life,
your momentary glare installed
some life back into me and your
fiery temper beckoned all of my
energy.

One moment ago-
heaven and hell interlocked into an
obscure painting which I choose to
ignore, your curling hair fell around
your face and framed your twinkling
deep brown eyes and our hands linked
eternally.

One moment ago-
the grassland made friends with our
feet and the horses ran fast enough to
reunite our spirits. The tapping on the
windows ceased and you followed me
across the moors in my red dress.

One moment ago-
I forgot that I was dead and welcomed
you into my bed, the coffin in the ground.
With our love, still, very much alive.

Certificate PG
Poem
Romance

Comments

Submitted by Lennie on
Really great poem Beeme, I can see the inspiration from Wuthering Heights has brought out another great poem from you. "One moment ago- I forgot that I was dead and welcomed you into my bed, the coffin in the ground. With our love, still, very much alive" i pictured the part in Wuthering Heights where this happens. Really loved the poem kept up the good work my friend :) Lennie x

Lennie

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I read Wuthering Heights for the first time this summer and I love your take on a very haunting tale! The last two stanzas are gorgeous ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thankyou Magic and Lennie for your kind words, I'm very pleased you both enjoyed! Beeme xx

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Submitted by rl murdoch on
Very nice Beeme. It seems your take on love is very real. You are very creative in how you express feelings. Keep up the good work. RL Murdoch

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Wuthering heights remains, one of my all time favourite books. This poem is really very good. You just get better and better Beeme; class stuff. Chris x

Submitted by Beeme on
Thankyou Rl murdoch, i'm really glad you enjoyed and liked my love imagery and emotions in this poem. :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thanks so much Chris, i'm happy you enjoyed and thank you for the compliment in there :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by sarah wilson on
A little beauty Beeme and Wuthering Heights is one of my favourites too. Going from strength to strength I think. sarah x

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you Sarah! I'm glad you enjoyed, nice to here from you :)

k.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Hi!Beeme excellent poem "One moment ago" I agree with all but I cried to watch and read "Wuthering Heights" I have dvd.Loved all of it One moment ago I was flying with the doves when you entered into my life! julie xx (:-

Submitted by Beeme on
hello Julie, nice to hear from you :D I'm so glad you enjoyed, I cry when I watch Wuthering Heights, I also have it on dvd x

k.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Beeme Been bad week neck? but now decided use right stuff!! etc;to-day and improved frightening read side effects ok. Been Eastbourne train not till mid-day decided to go Sun came out had be out of it. sun came out got few nic-knacks home 7pm. My secret was "!The Secret Garden" poem I tried on here paid acryllic name plate and stickers put on black cat like "Green Eyes" poem in corner and some little flowers, that's what I meant you could do.But of course Secret!why done it! quite expensive missed flowers, and can't put photo on Cat but stickers only 99p. Poetry readers to-night same place costs £4? not up to it. Hope your ok. did you celebrate! julie xx (:-

Submitted by Beeme on
Thanks you so much Nathan! Glad you ejnoyed. Beeme xx

k.