On Writing

Cherry

By Dynamaso

Thu, 04 Sep 2014
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7 comments
 

 

Life snatches batches of time;

of rhythm and cadence;

of lasting rhymes

that crowd together

and explode from my mind

in verbal splendor,

raw, unrefined,

which I lay down on paper,

electronically designed

to keep it all together

within border lines.

Still I want to breakout,

to see beyond that which binds

the past to the present

and to the future entwined;

to those greater mysteries

as yet undefined

where imagination meets reality

unfolding, divine.

 

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi there Dynamaso,

great poem with rhythm and rhyme. 

You show that the written word can take us many places that we had no idea existed,  till we actually come to think about and write them down.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by scratch on

I really like this one.  The rhyme is good and that quality is accentuated by a strong rhythm, the effect provides the reader with the sense that the poet is confident and trustworthy.

Very good.

 

Submitted by Bee on

I liked this too.

Bee

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Hi Mark, glad to be reading your work again. You have produced an enjoyable poem with the excellence that has always been your hallmark.

Best, Luigi.

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

this is lovely - and equally lovely to see you back. Post more soon please!

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Great to see you back, Mark.  Hope life is treating you kindlysmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by Dynamaso on

Hey kind folks, thanks for your support - much appreciated. And thanks for the cherry as well.