The potato eater

By Itane Vero
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I know. There comes a time that I will be
called away from this meadow. Like geese
hearing the whisperings of the Autumn.
fishermen listening to the screaming sea.
But for now I sleep under a blanket of dew,
I walk across the fiber-rich grass, I discuss
the weather with the deaf cows, I wave at
the farmer's wife, eat potatoes fried in lard.
Oh, I realize perfectly well. Near upon I
will be dressed in woollen suits, I will live
in limestone houses, speak the language of
bankers and office workers. I'll watch TV.
But as long as I hear no call, I will shuffle
along the willows, I will make from daisies
necklaces, I will believe that lame can walk,
think that death is another word for future.
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An interesting poem!
An interesting poem!
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death and future combined
death and future combined somehow into banker's crime. Not to late for us potato munchers to liberate!
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This is like going back and
This is like going back and looking forward to the future. Makes me want to go back and stay there, shuffling along the willows, making daisy chains. It's lovely.
I wonder if you need 'I know' at the start... Just a thought.
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I found this very moving, I
I found this very moving, I agree with Bee about thinking about the first two words.
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Definitely worth the visit,
Definitely worth the visit, this poem. I liked the structure, the voice, the...well, in short I liked all the words.
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