Lunar Café

By JoseHdz
Tue, 04 Jan 2011
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12 comments
I like just
Sitting here
In this cozy café
With you
Beneath the moon
Cigarettes lit
Coffee cups spilled
To fill with
European vodka
Look at the subtle way
In which the abstract
Painting
On the wall
Glistens
You are prettier still
In a more direct
And profound way
I like just
Sitting here
In this cozy café
With you
Beneath the moon
Your eyes
Are like kissable stars
And your lips
They seem almost
Unreachable.
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yes me too - love the small
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
yes me too - love the small details you pick out
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Entirely agree. Really good.
Entirely agree. Really good. Brilliant ending.
Seeker
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What a wonderful picture you
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
What a wonderful picture you conjure up, somewhere I
wouldn't mind being.
Congratulations on the well deserved cherries.
Jenny.
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new JoseHdz Yes,really liked
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new JoseHdz
Yes,really liked this.
well deserved cherry!
I felt like being there to.
julie
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Very romantic and evocative,
Very romantic and evocative, wish I were there.
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