Reaching for You
By JoseHdz
Tue, 01 Feb 2011
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Yesterday
I remember
Waking up
In the middle of
The night
Looking
For you
Reaching for
Your warmth
On the other side
Of the bed
All I found was
An empty 40 oz of
Cheap beer
And a couple of
Bukowski
Poems
That must
Have put me to
Sleep
But no
Yeah
I am doing
Fine
Darling
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do you ever read your poems
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do you ever read your poems - at readings? This would be fantastic - especially the final few lines.
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I love the simplicity of
I love the simplicity of your poems - you have a knack of saying just enough, never too much.
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Smashing! Tina;-)
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Smashing!
Tina;-)
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Another masterpiece Jose :]
Another masterpiece Jose :] Enjoyed greatly
Beeme xx
k.
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Again, your economy of words
Again, your economy of words but the images you evoke are superb. Loved this one!
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