Commute
By samhennig
Wed, 12 Feb 2025
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Tarmac crackles under tyres,
a beat that plays along
to the radio, songs of now
creating a disjoint. Songs
of now that reflect a past,
passed down. Refract the
truth of what happened.
Retract the sharper edges.
Retrace the steps,
reflects, deflects, selects
a different station.
Nearly there.
This world is mine within
these tin walls. At pace
the outside blurs and
whirring engines break
the monotony of the birds
incessant tweeting.
Trees set free by motion.
Grass given over to mud.
Construction creating progression.
No regression to our nature.
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nice beat. a good energy,
nice beat. a good energy, which in neat.
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I felt this was all passing
I felt this was all passing inside a car, nicely done!
Dougie Moody
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