December in Bridlington: 2012

By Seymour Frampton

Sun, 07 Apr 2013
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On a beach
in Bridlington
in the rain.
Cursing her.

I itch wildly.

I have shingles
and toffee.

Certificate U
Poem
Airbed and Isaac
Love

Comments

Submitted by scratch on
I like Bridlington. And I like this short poem. I just wish that it was a bit longer. The last two lines are excellent. Welcome by the way.

 

Submitted by Seymour Frampton on
I would like to make it longer, but feel it would only be padding. It was a cold day in Bridlington and I wanted to reflect that. Thank you for your kind words. Regards, Seymour Frampton

I have been published in the magazine, 'Shimmering Moth'. A now defunkt magazine that was could only be purchased in Eastern Toronto, Canada.

Submitted by scratch on
It's almost always cold in Bridlington! Maybe somehow get the coldness of the day to come across a little more acutely in some way. One or two extra words would do it.

 

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on
I agree with scratch. A bit too sparse I thought but the idea is attractive. Linda

Linda