Blackberry days

Thanks Sundays, that was the most difficult, I'm still not sure I said what I wanted, how I wanted so I'm really pleased you like it. Highhat, I think that's my own favourite too! Jennifer, Um I don't know really, I'll take it out! Fb, Heaney eh, yes, I'll take that! Sue, Thanks, I enjoy brevity. Scozen, how intuitive you are! many thanks

Thanks Tina and Seashore for taking time, I'm glad you like it. Hi Jennifer, thanks for your input, I appreciate what you're saying and I agree that punctuation is important in prose, perhaps if I had more confidence in it I would be more willing to have a go!. I read a lot of poetry and most of it uses very little if any punctuation and to be honest, it looks cleaner on the page and as long as it doesn't muddy the meaning I prefer to read it that way. I'm undecided actually.

That's very kind of you, as you can see I've had plenty of help since I came to abc, nothing distressing about it, we can only try to develop at our own pace and keep our own voice intact. keep polishing,:}