The sea, the sun and the moon
By skinner_jennifer
Sat, 24 Jul 2010
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Salty sun beams dance
on salty seas, reminds
me when I danced with thee.
The sun dazzles me with its
beauty, touching me caressingly.
When those salty sun beams
disappear, all that's left I
fear, is a cold, dark mass,
When once we danced alas, to the
sound of the breeze, across
those salty seas.
Then when day time disappears,
night time comes, the moon is
clear. She shines down on those
salty seas, then those memories
come flooding back to me.
Once again I see the dance,
I sway with it, go into a trance.
Like diamonds glistening in and
out, those moon beams sparkle all
about. There I stand, I close my
eyes, listen to those gentle tides.
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Ah wow I really like this! I
Ah wow I really like this! I love the sea & write about it and the sun and moon too! The last four lines my favourite I could almost be there myself!
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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a far better poet than i
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a far better poet than i
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thanks but i am more of a
Permalink Submitted by darkenwolf on
thanks but i am more of a story teller than a poet but i'll keep trying
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thats pretty much how it
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thats pretty much how it works with me too
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this is really good kind of
this is really good kind of makes me wish i was at the seaside, good thing i only have to wait a few days.
Sally H
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