Untitled

By skinner_jennifer
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This is a poem written by an old pen pal of mine from 1995. I think his name was Chris, but cannot be sure as he always signed his letters with a C at the end. He lived in Newark Ohio USA at the time with his wife and young son.
I'm posting it here because I think it's so good and wanted to share on abc tales. Hope that's okay, will take off if not. "BUT ALL CREDIT GOES TO HIM."
There wasn't any title for his poem, so I simply calling it Untitled.
There's a single light on the prairie tonight,
wolf howls at the moon as the owl takes flight,
mother holds me close as father smokes his pipe,
I stare at flames in fire as my vision grows slight,
and through my eyes I see
what the eagle says is going to be,
long trails of cloud as my people flee,
running from the great pale beast – I can't believe,
the water and air just aren't the same – it's scaring me,
and I see the animals we worship and love,
from the Elk to the Ant, the Bear to the Dove,
left dead and skinless to drown in their blood,
no respect for their slaughter, rotting flesh in the mud,
I then see our people, shackled in chains,
their land gone and taken, no pride remains,
their families are broken, pale face calls us insane,
young men look to their fathers, they look back in shame,
as I come back I'm sad, I feel so alone – so slight,
when I ask my father, he says “It'll be alright,”
as long as the land, our people will stay,
if not in the flesh, our memories sustained,
and there will always be a piece of us here,
like the Bear, Elk and Eagle, for so many years,
like the wind, the mountain, the river and fields,
even tho we'd be gone, we're still very real,
and I fall asleep under the starry moonlit night,
with the single light on the prairie tonight.
Written lovingly by Chris Estadt of Newark Ohio USA.
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yeh, I like it, not sure if
yeh, I like it, not sure if memory is enough to sustain a land - people forget- we all do.
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I take it the author was of
I take it the author was of native American descent?
When people groups meet for the first time, there's usually such mistrust, midjudgement, and fear and anger escalates. But there were some good friendships struck, and gain from the contacts, getting to understand those from differnt backgrounds.
The Indians must have had good knowledge of their land and its plants, but I think only some (groups) worshipped land and plants, and that didn't help them. Rhiannon
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t is a lovely and heartfelt
It is a lovely and heartfelt poem that your friend wrote, Jenny. Just one little niggle: the 'title' seems to be misspelt.
Luigi xx
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..trying to catch up with all
..trying to catch up with all the great stuff I've missed. I think it's ok Jenny, since you've given him his due credit. Are you still in touch? I'm sure he'd love to see a link to it. It's a beautiful poem
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I didn't mean to suggest you
I didn't mean to suggest you give out his address - I agree with you that's best kept private. I was just thinking if you were still in touch to send him a link to this post. But I am sure as it stands, it's fine with us here. Thank you for posting it Jenny
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It's a great poem! It's "pale
It's a great poem! It's "pale face" people who have caused climate change and pollution, surely the most insane anyone could be! Instead of despising those who live sustainably with Nature we should be learning from them. I like the sense of space, the images and the lively rhythm, which balances with the desolate message. As Insert says, I hope your friend one day finds his poem has been so appreciated by all of us, thankyou for posting it!
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