Drowning
By Yutka
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I know about drowning.
Not the emotional lyrical death
some poets glorify,
but of acrid salt water
like memories, and cold
as marble coffins,
where the dead are put to rest.
Water flowing into the mouth and throat
fills every crack, freezes
and splits, swells and bursts your skin.
you, born without gills
in crystalline water, gentler
and more powerful, clearer and darker.
This is where you came from
We will drown, one way or the other,
return to the dark womb, the gentle
heartbeat of the deep
without a voice to call us back
without a hand holding us back
from unborn dreams.
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I've heard they say you hallucinate
I've heard they say you hallucinate like crazy when you drown, like symphony concerts the second coming the works. And your typical near death experiences ( if you do come back that is). Is it so? I think it is perhaps lack of breath and depleting blood oxygen levels. Some snake bites do the same and toadstools. Your poem is not so unrealistic after all.
Keep well Yutka, well done! & Nolan
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