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55 of my comments have received 55 Great Feedback votes

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A vivid insight into the

Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2017

A vivid insight into the deepest recesses of the troubled, self-smothering mind.

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There is much beauty revealed

Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2017

There is much beauty revealed with each new reading of this long, moving lament. So many lines linger in the mind:

"A year not lived in time lost forever in rhyme."
"Lain bare its ashen self ... there."
"To enfold the newest...

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On first reading I find "How

Posted on Wed, 01 Nov 2017

On first reading I find "How do I write Mother" chilling, dark, and extremely powerful. The way the word dissolves the paper, the way the paint overflows its boundaries ... there are some exquisite lines: "Wetted pigments set with brush on...

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So good to know ABC will be

Posted on Sat, 22 Oct 2016

So good to know ABC will be continuing for the time being. Long may this vital creative community live!

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Heart-wrenching, this raw and

Posted on Fri, 20 Jan 2017

Heart-wrenching, this raw and honest expression of pain and despair. And so sad to learn just how long the chilling emptiness at the heart of your life has existed, hidden behind the smiling warmth of your lively persona and your busy life....

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Posted in once life January 18, 2017

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You have excelled youself,

Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2016

You have excelled youself, Marcia. Each re-reading of this epic poem brings new rewards. You have a unique mastery of language and use words to convey deep emotions and profound thoughts in the way a composer might arrange the elements of a great...

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A painfully honest, moving,

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2016

A painfully honest, moving, haunting reflection upon solitude: the reasons for being alone, the uncertainty, the loneliness but ultimately - as Nolan says - self sufficiemcy and peace of mind.

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Thank you for taking us with

Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016

Thank you for taking us with you on your cheerful Spring walk!
Strikes me this might become, with colourful illustrations, a book explaining alternative energy technologies to schoolkids. (I know some excellent illustrators I could put you...

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A fresh, affecting

Posted on Tue, 23 Feb 2016

A fresh, affecting description of a ritual that most of us will have to carry out in our lifetimes.  it brings to mind the anguish my siblings and I went through deciding on the right wording for our mother's grave.   Like you, we kept it simple...

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Posted in When we made Love

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Your writing jumps from the

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016

Your writing jumps from the page and teases and taunts with devilish glee. You are a master of your art, lavadis, so don't worry about Doubt - you've just given her a fatal thrashing.

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