24/11/24 Alfred Muggins was feeling rather sad this morning. He was on his own at the moment. His wife hadn’t actually left him, but she almost might...
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A great poem! I did enjoy
Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2024
A great poem! I did enjoy reading it, although it seemed to repeat many of its thoughts, but with no loss of creativity, and it kept me reading to the end. A sad poem about today's world, and our inability to turn it from its destruction and...
A poignant piece about Christmas! It can be a bleak time. Life is so easily made tragic. Thankfully we can't see all of our futures so we can enjoy and give at Christmas time!
It sounds as if Spencer is talking and intervening just a bit too much, and is becoming a bit irritating. Very cleverly constructed and Spencer makes a very realistic android. Meeting the family with him around becomes a bit of an embarassment...
A great piece. What an appropriate way to show the hypocrisy of so many western media, and news organisations, and government and political statements. Very well written. Many people should read this to counter the whitewashing and propaganda!
Terrible and incredible crime! You describe it all very clearly, and very reasonably in my opinion. How does a man commit such a crime over a long period of time? He should certainly be punished severely in some way, and never trusted to look...
A good combination of horror and science fiction here. You make it seem quite believable as you do in many of your literary explorations. Your character here obviously doesn't really believe Fritz can live forever in the machine, otherwise he...
Sheffield is in some ways a very beautiful city, a bit like Rome - built on seven hills, but unfortunately it lets itself down, and as evidenced above, it has been getting very out of hand recently. It is certainly becoming a metaphor for modern...
I am glad you have marked this sad day for Afghanistan and for civilisation, and for so called religion! It certainly deserves a mention, a lot more than just a mention. How terrible this is! What a step backwards, a long way backwards! I didn't...
Thanks Di. As I said above in reply to Insert they dropped me for no good reason. I think it has happened to a few of us. I have 20 years of service with the previous company, although work did rather dry up a couple of years ago for a while. I...
Thanks Insert after another couple of weeks in the job Alfred rang up after a couple of days of again not being given any work to ask for more and was told his availablility wasn't good enough, even though he had worked in all 4 periods of the...
A great poem! I did enjoy
Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2024
A great poem! I did enjoy reading it, although it seemed to repeat many of its thoughts, but with no loss of creativity, and it kept me reading to the end. A sad poem about today's world, and our inability to turn it from its destruction and...
Read full commentPosted in I Go To Church Each Sunday
A poignant piece about
Posted on Fri, 06 Dec 2024
A poignant piece about Christmas! It can be a bleak time. Life is so easily made tragic. Thankfully we can't see all of our futures so we can enjoy and give at Christmas time!
Read full commentPosted in Christ Mas Lights.
It sounds as if Spencer is
Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2024
It sounds as if Spencer is talking and intervening just a bit too much, and is becoming a bit irritating. Very cleverly constructed and Spencer makes a very realistic android. Meeting the family with him around becomes a bit of an embarassment...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you - Part 42
A great piece. What an
Posted on Mon, 11 Nov 2024
A great piece. What an appropriate way to show the hypocrisy of so many western media, and news organisations, and government and political statements. Very well written. Many people should read this to counter the whitewashing and propaganda!
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Terrible and incredible crime
Posted on Wed, 13 Nov 2024
Terrible and incredible crime! You describe it all very clearly, and very reasonably in my opinion. How does a man commit such a crime over a long period of time? He should certainly be punished severely in some way, and never trusted to look...
Read full commentPosted in That's OK Then!
A good combination of horror
Posted on Wed, 30 Oct 2024
A good combination of horror and science fiction here. You make it seem quite believable as you do in many of your literary explorations. Your character here obviously doesn't really believe Fritz can live forever in the machine, otherwise he...
Read full commentPosted in Who Wants to Live Forever?
Sheffield is in some ways a
Posted on Sun, 10 Nov 2024
Sheffield is in some ways a very beautiful city, a bit like Rome - built on seven hills, but unfortunately it lets itself down, and as evidenced above, it has been getting very out of hand recently. It is certainly becoming a metaphor for modern...
Read full commentPosted in Running the Gauntlet : Paranoid and Harrassed In The City Of His Birth! By Alfred N.Muggins
I am glad you have marked
Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024
I am glad you have marked this sad day for Afghanistan and for civilisation, and for so called religion! It certainly deserves a mention, a lot more than just a mention. How terrible this is! What a step backwards, a long way backwards! I didn't...
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Thanks Di. As I said above in
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2024
Thanks Di. As I said above in reply to Insert they dropped me for no good reason. I think it has happened to a few of us. I have 20 years of service with the previous company, although work did rather dry up a couple of years ago for a while. I...
Read full commentPosted in On the Shelf Again, so to speak! By Alfred N.Muggins
Thanks Insert after another
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2024
Thanks Insert after another couple of weeks in the job Alfred rang up after a couple of days of again not being given any work to ask for more and was told his availablility wasn't good enough, even though he had worked in all 4 periods of the...
Read full commentPosted in On the Shelf Again, so to speak! By Alfred N.Muggins
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