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2215 of my comments have received 2262 Great Feedback votes

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Some brilliant lines in this

Posted on Sun, 01 Apr 2018

Some brilliant lines in this Kilb

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Posted in Alternative Prayer of Remembrance, Easter 2018

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this reads really well Di - I

Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018

this reads really well Di - I especially love this line:

Up the hill

seagulls pearl grey wheel wide winged carving time

into slivers of wonder at their grace

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I think you must have got cut

Posted on Tue, 06 Mar 2018

I think you must have got cut off by our word limit TKMaxx. If there's more, perhaps you could split this into two equal shorter parts. I hope you do because people prefer to read shorter pieces on a screen and this is really worth reading. It's...

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I've read all three parts of

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I've read all three parts of this and the intricate detail and local colour really shine through. The dialogue is lively and the characters are beginning to emerge as believable people.

If you're looking for suggestions:

- It really...

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Posted in Fifteen Chapter 1 (part3)

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I hope your snow will

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I hope your snow will disappear soon Camilla. I am also stuck here and it's driving me bananas, but I'm painting the insides of cupboards, and windows which is quite soothing and stops me from thinking about the fact that the heating oil is...

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Some tight,sharp observation

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018

Some tight,sharp observation in this pen portrait. A very believable study of (unjustifiable) smug

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Firstly I really liked the

Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018

Firstly I really liked the way in which you ended this - because I was expecting them all to crash, and you don't really think about the 'almost' do you - so the detailed description of just before the crash was brilliant, as was the way in which...

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Posted in Man, Son, SatNav, Bus - Part 2

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You had me right there on the

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2018

You had me right there on the porch with you. I like the quiet contemplative style of this poem - well done, and welcome back!

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beautiful observation in this

Posted on Sat, 10 Feb 2018

beautiful observation in this London - I particularly like those first few lines

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I love your animated writing

Posted on Tue, 06 Feb 2018

I love your animated writing style Elsie - brings the whole thing to life - and the school description rings more than a few bells as I went to somewhere similar (until 'asked to leave'). Very much looking forward to part three!

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